Wednesday, June 29, 2005

Terribly, Terribly Tired of Samuel's Scattered Soul

Samuel can't see simple things the way
The family treads the park
Scattered brains on safety swings they say
Inappropriate remark


Oh yeah, for sure
I wish, I were
Part of the cure


Samuel and his rifle fired twice
He could barely hear the sound
Samuel soaked his shoulder in some ice
Cigarettes to settle down

2 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

very nice piece of writing.

I'm not quite sure I understand it completely, but I am sure that it flows nicely.

June 29, 2005 4:01 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

hmm yes. thanks you. i'm sure i don't understand it either, but im sure it seems a bit dark, which is why i followed it with the banal piece about the telephone.

But! Surfing the rotten.com library today (i highly recommend it. it is a seemingly unending wave of interconnected information.) illumed the fact that "samael" was another name for "ialdabaoth", a fact that i think fits the tone of the piece well.

June 29, 2005 4:14 PM  

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